the level design is good, i think some more details would really help show the narrative more clearly but i like the concept and can see what you're planning with it.
The level design is good. But I believe that you should add the narrative elements to the level so that the player can understand the story better. But the level design is pretty good.
I think the prototype is good. For the narrative, there should be clues/notes or evidence. To understand the story. However, the level design is alright, the boxes in the middle of the warehouse, you can walk through and maybe add more objects into the warehouse but overall I thought the prototype was good.
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the level design is good, i think some more details would really help show the narrative more clearly but i like the concept and can see what you're planning with it.
The level design is good. But I believe that you should add the narrative elements to the level so that the player can understand the story better. But the level design is pretty good.
I think the prototype is good. For the narrative, there should be clues/notes or evidence. To understand the story. However, the level design is alright, the boxes in the middle of the warehouse, you can walk through and maybe add more objects into the warehouse but overall I thought the prototype was good.